I also like the fact that I'm finding logic holes to correct that slipped my mind in the hurry of the original writing. I'm enjoying this, and I'm looking forward to fixing them and creating the final product.
I'm also looking for venues in which to submit a novelette-length work of dark fantasy. Maybe this story could be accepted for a Hallowe'en issue of something. I'll keep looking.
Mark suggests that I write a few more fantasy stories and publish them all in an ebook. What do the rest of you think? I honestly would rather go through the "peer review" of an editor rather than just write something with editing from friends and hope to produce something that will meet professional standards.
TV: I'm loving the new commercial about the little girl with the lemonade stand whose Dad leaves his iPhone with her, and she starts a massive lemonade business with it. Very cute and much fun!