Aerden (aerden) wrote,
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Religiosity

Dream: Last night I dreamed that I was going into holy orders. I was hugging my family and friends good-bye, and I felt very happy and excited about it. I remember the entire dream as being suffused with joy.

Writing: So...I posted a poem of mine called "Sword" at a crit group in hopes of getting some critiques on it. I can't decide if the poem is too long or if it is as long as it needs to be, and I know some other changes need to be made, too.

Someone asks why the poem is about God's sword maiming women.

*headdesk*
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