Just...something that beautiful. Or maybe it's just the joy I feel from remembering the writing of that piece, rather than any objective skill in the writing itself.
Actually, after thinking about it, I'm sure my writing isn't all that spectactular here; it's the writing plus the song lyrics that makes this bit so powerful, to me. Alone, I think the writing is just average. But with "Kathy's Song" included...Wow.
*sighs happily again*
I'm sure moonwolf41 would tell me I'm over-analyzing, and I probably am. :)